Wednesday, June 13, 2012

Correcting Benjamin

So, here is the Benjamin's post about the movie "Twelve Monkeys"... I'm doing this one because I saw the movie not so long ago and I really liked it, so here it is:

There are so many movies that are really good and that I like! But there’s one special, I don’t really know why, but I always think about this movie as my favorite. This movie it’s called “Twelve Monkeys”. The first time that I saw it I was like 8 or 10 years old. The movie it’s about a future (it was filmed in 1995 and it was suppose that the future in that time it was 2003) in which all the human kind was attacked by a new kind of virus wiping out the 99% of inhabitants of the earth. The survivors’ hided underground, in an authoritarian and violent government. So the scientist of this time created a time machine so somebody can travel to the time before the first infection of the virus (1993) so they could create a cure and find the responsible of the destruction of the human kind. So James Cole (Bruce Willis) it’s selected to do this travel through the time because he haves more resistance to the consequences of the travel, in which the mind starts to play tricks on him.  In the first travel there was a mistake and he ended in a mental hospital where he meets the Dr. Kathryn Railly (Madeleine Stowe) and a real lunatic called Jeffrey Goines (Brad Pitt, one of his first movies). The fun part of the movie it’s that you don’t know what the movie it’s about at the beginning, and also you don’t know if the main character it’s living in a real or an imaginary world. It’s pretty confusing… I think that’s why I love this movie!


And here it is my corrected version:

There are so many movies that are really good and that I like! But there’s one special, I don’t really know why, but I always think about this movie as my favorite. This movie it’s ( ) (is called) called “Twelve Monkeys”. The first time that I saw it I was like 8 or 10 years old. The movie it’s about a future (it was filmed in 1995 and it was suppose (T) (supposed)  that the future in that time it ( ) was 2003) in which all the human kind was attacked by a new kind of virus wiping out the 99% of inhabitants of the earth. The survivors’ hided (T) (hidden) underground, in (WF) (under an) an authoritarian and violent government. So the scientist of this time created a time machine so somebody can (T) (could) travel to the time before the first infection of the virus (1993) so they could create a cure and find the responsible of the destruction of the human kind. So James Cole (Bruce Willis) it’s ( ) (is selected)selected to do this travel through the ( ) (through time) time because he haves more resistance (WE) (he is more resistent) to the consequences of the travel, in which the mind starts (NA) (begins) to play tricks on him.  In the first travel there was a mistake and he ended in a mental hospital where he meets the Dr. Kathryn Railly (Madeleine Stowe) and a real lunatic called Jeffrey Goines (Brad Pitt, one of his first movies). The fun part of the movie it’s that you don’t know what the movie it’s about at the beginning, and also you don’t know if the main character it’s ( ) (is living) living in a real or an imaginary world. It’s pretty confusing… I think that’s why I love this movie!

I hope I did it well correcting this.. if not, then you are welcome to do a correction of the correction.

Bye.
 

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